The whole lot needs insulating, cistern and pipework are extremely susceptible to freezing if left unprotected, particularly with the cistern on that platform. Personally I'd also be removing that redundant dead leg that fed the Feed and Expansion cistern, and strip out what copper you can from the redundant sections, and have a weigh in.
As Muggles has advised, if you are not planning on replacing the HW cylinder for the Unvented type, I'd replace the cistern with new, and fit the appropriate Byelaw 30 kit, which will include an air tight lid, and suitable insulation. Make sure platform is solid enough to support the weight, there's around 120kg of water there.