The vapour barrier in the dwarf wall external wall goes on the warm side of the insulation. So insulation between studs then the vapour barrier and plasterboard. The vapour barrier could be foiled back sheets but doesn't need to be could be visqueen and normal plasterboard. Good idea taking the ceiling down. Don't know if you know but the ceiling in the garage to the house has to have 1 hour fire rating can be achieved by double sheeting with normal plasterboard which each layer is rated 1/2 hour or using a single layer of fire rated plasterboard which is rated for 1 hour. The insulation should be pushed up tight to the flooring then straps to hold it up. Don't know if the previous ceiling had been dwanged, but if it has not dwang the perimeter and 1200mm centers it stops the joints cracking from people walking about upstairs. Your ceiling will not need a vapour barrier as it is not a condesation risk. I personally would use the fire board as only need to do a single layer to achieve 1 hour fire rating