Looking through the info, it appears that the Ampire is expecting a direct connection to a device such as the FMB920. It probably has in-built pullup resistors anyway.The theory is that I can have the FMB920 send a "GND" signal via DOUT to the Ampire (Pin 2) and hold ground "until I say so".
The wiring is "good", well, for "normal functionality"... it's just this DOUT <> GND issue. That said, each device has it's own direct line to +, and own - ground points.
To troubleshoot, I would start by testing the DOut1 - if you have something like a small 12V bulb (around 5W, or an LED and a suitable resistor), does it illuminate when connected between DOut1 and +12V when you enter the appropriate command?
And on the Ampire, brown on pin 2 is by default not plugged in. Have you connected it?
If you connect pin 2 to ground, does the Ampire behave as expected?