Not wishing to be a party pooper but are you sure you've got the dimensions/proportions right. Your plan makes the house look much taller and narrower than your photos. For instance the first floor window heads are tight under the roof soffit but the plan shows a considerable gap, likewise the gap between the first floor window sills and the lean-to porch roof.
Another trick that might be worth trying is to lower the roof eaves slightly. It makes the extension more subservient so you can get away with a smaller set back. It is also a bit easier on the eye.
Another trick that might be worth trying is to lower the roof eaves slightly. It makes the extension more subservient so you can get away with a smaller set back. It is also a bit easier on the eye.